Warm Up: This poster says "Park Carefully" in bold letters so it is very easy to identify it's central message. I chose this and drew the cartoon because it was something that had happened to me, I wanted to help promote the message of parking carefully to help others who may get into a similar situation.
Most of the writing is just in a plain handwritten style to keep it simple and focus on the main message, which is in in larger bold capital letters at the bottom ("PARK CAREFULLY!") The bold is used to stress the point and grab attention. The drawing is very simple, a stick figure with no face and some straight lines resembling a vehicle. I like the simplistic stlye so I do not think much would change if I weren't hindered by artistic ability, except it would be much neater and maybe a little more colorful.
Peer Review:
I would like the review to keep in mind that this is the first draft of this paper and the ideas may be incomplete or not as well thought out and arranged as they could and will be. What do you feel I could do the make sure that I am fulfilling the assignment. What do you think you do well when you right a paper that I need to work on with mine. Where is my paper the weakest and strongest?
1 comment:
Justin-
Good job on analyzing the cover of the novel. However, I don't think I got a good feel of what you're thesis was or what the entire paper was going to be about. You did a good job explaining what the cover looked like, but how does it tie into the novel more and relate to what the book is about? Also, maybe you could explain more as to why you think the cover is so interesting. Are there symbols and themes on the cover that relate to symbols and themes in the book?
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